Reviewing Myself

For my writing process analysis essay, my thesis was that I can take multiple steps to improve my writing process. These three steps were, become more organized, focus more on the papers content, and attempt new writing strategies. I believe these three points will drastically help me improve my writing process and therefore make me write better papers.
My main weaknesses in my paper were vagueness among my supporting ideas, seemingly long sentences, and confusion about proper MLA formatting. I also need to add better transitions and work on the overall organization and flow of the paper. By putting more details into my paper, I will beef up the content as well as make it clearer to my audience.
I believe my paper is well thought out, I just need to go back over it and fill in where it is weak. Since I already have my thesis and main points laid out strongly, this shouldn't be a problem.